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Thursday, March 24, 2011
Sikes_DeadManWalking
I like the walking reading from top to bottom on the 2nd one..what do you think? Any additional changes I should make? Thanks and have a fun and safe trip.
The walking is still to extreme and playful. it should be more somber and not so whimsical. Instead of going straight up it should begin to rise as it moves to the right and slowly leave the page. Right now it looks like it has helium in it. Think more like rising clouds.
Thanks, I definitely agree and was having trouble making it appear to be more serious. Should it go up to the right in more of a diagonal way? Should the letters be more spaced out as the word gets higher to the top of the page?
The walking is still to extreme and playful. it should be more somber and not so whimsical. Instead of going straight up it should begin to rise as it moves to the right and slowly leave the page. Right now it looks like it has helium in it. Think more like rising clouds.
ReplyDeleteThanks, I definitely agree and was having trouble making it appear to be more serious. Should it go up to the right in more of a diagonal way? Should the letters be more spaced out as the word gets higher to the top of the page?
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