Sikes_Revised Dead Man Walking

What do you think about the layout now?

Filippov - Opera layout revision

Revised. Does it work?
Feels too uptight to be butterfly wings...

Gunter-roughrevision

Filippov_MadameButterfly

inspired by the symmetry of butterfly wings, shattering objects, and ripples of water.

Gunter - Project 5 Roughs

Shine_The Marriage of Figaro

Smith_The Marriage of Figaro

Armas-Ariadne auf Naxos

Should I make the top section explode more?

Couvillion: Opera Rough

Robinowich_TheMarriageOfFigaro

Please give me lots of feedback. Thanks!

Eric Timmerman Madame butterfly

Piper Opera Rough

Edit: I took your ideas and revised my rough. What do you think?

First Rough

Revised Draft

Davila_Lucia Di Lammermoor

I am debating over which typeface is more appropriate for the Lammmermoor opera. I like both, but I think Futura is more attention grabbing and has better readability.



*Revised: I worked on my first rough and evened everything out. please tell me what you think.

leal_the marriage of figaro

Dale_ Peter Grimes

I tried to get the second one more angled from the lower left corner. Should I push this more, choose a different corner, or just go with the centered idea?