Sikes_Revised Dead Man Walking

What do you think about the layout now?

Filippov - Opera layout revision

Revised. Does it work?
Feels too uptight to be butterfly wings...

Filippov_MadameButterfly

inspired by the symmetry of butterfly wings, shattering objects, and ripples of water.

Gunter - Project 5 Roughs

Smith_The Marriage of Figaro

Armas-Ariadne auf Naxos

Should I make the top section explode more?

Couvillion: Opera Rough

Piper Opera Rough

Edit: I took your ideas and revised my rough. What do you think?

First Rough

Revised Draft

Dale_ Peter Grimes

I tried to get the second one more angled from the lower left corner. Should I push this more, choose a different corner, or just go with the centered idea?

Sikes_DeadManWalking

I like the walking reading from top to bottom on the 2nd one..what do you think?
Any additional changes I should make? Thanks and have a fun and safe trip.