For this one I wanted to show that when I get home at the end of the day all I want to do is take a shower and relax. So I'm communicating that my main focus is to just relax. I chose futura as the typeface because I wanted something without serifs and this worked well. It makes it look modern which I like. I kind of just wanted to see how this one worked but I am leaning toward my car composition.
I like the shower idea but maybe to make it the stronger one, you could add some tiles to the shower or some distinguishing item. Sometimes when you shower, its so awesome that you don’t see anything else – so maybe its good all on its own?
ReplyDeleteWhen I first saw this I got confused because your words cut off and it confused me because my eye didn’t automatically go to the next line. Again, I think you need to use smaller font and more text. I think it would be cool if you describe your day and then said you had to take a shower to relax.. and instead of the “@” you could have a word that says “soothing” or “relaxing” or things like that. I like where you are going with this.. I just feel like you need more… also it looks like your text is all one font. I think it look cool if you emphasized some words, like “relax” “watch cheesy tv” stuff like that. If you were going to go with this concept I would add something in the back ground, like a shower curtain , or bath tub… all in all, I like your car concept the best because I think it is describing you more. ☺
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