Sunday, September 27, 2009

Lawdanski Proj 3 Roughs


This design conveys me being overwhelmed with everything that I have to do that day. I used Myriad Pro so I could have a variety of strokes to give a very chaotic feel.

1 comment:

  1. Your image of yourself holding up the day is nice. I think that the wording of the day should be more chaotic. At this point it is very straight and still. I would like to see more chaos. Maybe if you could skew some of the fonts more or just have more words. I would like to see the whole top of the page full of words. Your choice of type is nice. The non-serif font can be bold and can portray a more heavy chaotic feeling. Another thing I would do is exaggerate the weight of the day by maybe making the person look more squished at the bottom of the page. If the type of the day takes up most of the page it will give more of a since of the weight being on the little guys shoulders. Add more chaos that will make it more intriguing.
    Looks good, Great Job Lawdanski!

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